Since my Yellow Wallpaper adaptation was WAY too overpopulated with text, I wanted to keep the story simple for this one, so I chose Little Red Riding Hood. You can find the PDF here. Enjoy!
Wednesday, September 9, 2009
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The story holds pretty well on its own, but there is too much focus on Grandma and not enough of an introduction for some of the other characters. Is the story about Red or is it about Grandma? The characterization is pretty funny although I don't get the jokes some of the time. You have character descriptions but their personalities don't come across in the script.
ReplyDeleteThere isn't enough of the 'you' element integrated into the script itself, I think. The character descriptions at the beginning are great, but they would be better integrated in so we'll know who the characters are.